• Do you agree or disagree? It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
A glance at people’s attitude toward relaxation, brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, what is the best activity to become refresh. Although some people believe that reading a book or watching a movie can reduce the brain pressures and help person to feel relaxed, I think vice versa. As a medical student, after several years of research, I assert that physical activity is what the body needs to recover energy and feel refresh.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea, lies in the fact that physical exercise makes brain to produce Endorephine, a substance that causes feeling of happiness and enjoyment. This neurotransmitter is essential for body and its level is 100 times higher after physical activities. Normally psychologists recommend depressed people to register for a gym and regularly participate in sports activities. Not only does it help brain to restore energy, but also reduce the physical diseases. Therefore, sport is a good choice to consider if individuals feel bored.
Another reason that I should deem is the fact that we are required to go outside for most types of exercises. Going outside increases the amount of oxygen which brain needs. On the other hand, when people are alone at home, they think about their problems and stressful situations more. The solution is to change the way of thinking and give the brain cells some rest. A study at Harvard university shows that being part of a group or even walking outdoor strengthen the mental status because of concentration on enjoyable subjects. Hence, reading a book does not have benefits of physical activity.
Admittedly, watching a movie with friends or family has several advantages. The friendship bond creates important signal in brain and spirits the mood. Nevertheless, it is a short-term solution and for long-term it increases the risk of stroke. So, I still claim that physical activity controls the stress better.
Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I strongly suggest people to choose physical activities for relaxation because not only does it have physical benefits, but also it gives you mental advantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20224719101 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84121402915 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587078651685 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8321101104 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4736842105 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112240206951 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342140191287 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459378178482 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656701218099 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025273934636 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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