Some people think it is more beneficial to travel to foreign countries than do in their own country since people experience various new cultures and lifestyles as going out on a limb and let their curiosity guide them. However, in my opinion, I definitely think that people gain a lot from traveling in their own country in the way that they can spend more time enjoying travel itself instead of investing time in planning a trip and it enhances the nation’s economy.
To begin with, traveling in their own country is advantageous for especially those who had a lack of experience of travel. This is because it is much easier for them to plan the trip considering communication and information issues. So to speak, using the same language and being familiar with the transportation system can escape people from chances of getting lost or panicking in the middle of nowhere. Moreover, these two aspects are also helpful when people gather information about where to go for beautiful scenery and where to eat fancy meals for dinner during traveling. As a result, people who engage in traveling in their own countries use more time for feeling the air of the traveled regions. Take the example of my friend. She had never been elsewhere except her hometown until she decided to travel to different regions of her country. At first, she was worried about challenging situations she might have faced, but while traveling in her own countries, she met many amazing people who were willing to help her and recommend a bunch of places for sightseeing. She realized that she didn’t have trouble communicating with people and figuring out the map since she traveled in her own countries!
On top of that, taking trips to your own countries play a pivotal role in boosting tourism industries in your nation. Developing tourist industries create jobs and promote consumption which provides capitals in your country, and it leads to entire economy improvement. The perfect example of this my country. The country used to have a lack of tourists both from one’s own country and other nations. However, it changed little by little after the president undertook a project on improving travel facilities and services to attract members of a nation first. A lot of people in my country took part in this project to enliven the country’s tourism industries. Many tourist companies newly established and hired employers to meet demands. Thus, citizens posted their traveling experiences on social media and spread out to other countries. Now, hundreds of thousands of tourists visit my country to admire its popularity even from foreign countries.
To sum up, I admire the valuable experiences might you can get from traveling to other nations. However, it is undeniable that travel around your country attributed to gain satisfying travel and enhance its economy by reducing the rate of unemployment in tourism industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...popularity even from foreign countries. To sum up, I admire the valuable experie...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as a result, in my opinion, so to speak, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08713692946 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79527341876 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533195020747 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8501590691 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.761904762 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409125097389 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117016223047 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962625767662 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269128452778 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062403151441 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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