Do you agree or disagree with statement below?
It is a waste of money for government to fund space travel or space exploration.
No one can overlook the fact that investing on space exploration and space travel needs huge fund. Regarding of space researches have been conducted recently, it sounds hopeful to invest on space exploration and space travel in order to achieve noticeable successes. Were I asked to express my idea about pay money for space exploration and space travel, I would rather to say that I definitely agree with this suggestion. Among numerous reasons, my reasons will be explained below.
To commence with, new technologies such as GPS, virtual spaces, video call and so on are based on satellites orbiting the Earth in space. Not only does controlling these satellites need space knowledge, but also the technologies using Internet and satellites requires space knowledge which can be achievable by investing on space exploration.
The second reason lies in the fact that, our next generation will live on another planet. To elucidate this, Earth has faced a catastrophe on global scale. This disaster occurs because of Earth’s pollutions such as air pollution, nuclear trashes, soil erosion, lack of water supply, finishing oil resources. Recently I read an article in a major newspaper which pointed out that by 2050 half of human beings will be transported to Mars or on another suitable planet to live there which demonstrates the necessity of space knowledge and space travel. Had space scientists not explored this much, we would not have been able to live on another planet safely and peacefully.
To make this long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, we may draw a conclusion that investing on space travel and exploration help country keep up with new science and new technologies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'half' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'halves'.
Suggestion: halves
...ewspaper which pointed out that by 2050 half of human beings will be transported to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, regarding, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17328519856 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83367057103 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8130661633 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333259291422 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123345749889 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105461520162 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202162298369 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12551249137 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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