do you agree or disagree?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
The question is whether the university should dedicate high salaries for professors for optimizing the quality of education or not. Everyone with regard to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I am inclined to refute this idea because there are several beneficial ways for achieving this goal and spending money for the professors' income will not be effective. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that nowadays humans are living in such a technology- driven world. Since the technology has been keeping marching forward; hence, all members of a society would rather rely on it. In a comparison with past, one can realize that now students access a wide range of data through internet and even sometimes they can challenge their professors' knowledge. It may seem a bit of ambitiously; however, in my view, today's the classes are for question and answer and the professors do not feel any pressure for tendering new scientific matters because all of new discoveries are available on the internet. In such a circumstance, the university should spend its budget to provide a high speed of internet and the most up-dated computers and other electronic devices.
The second reason for my argument lies in the fact libraries and laboratories are crucial as much as inside classes. A great part of students' knowledge refers to such advantageous places; consequently, investing on this sector can provide constructive consequences. Buying the newest published books, creating a deal with the best international newspapers, purchasing the most up-dated equipment all of all assist the universities to achieve prosperity as soon as possible. Besides, one should notice that students' spirit needs to avoid stress and anxiety due to the pressure of lessons and homesick; therefore, the suggestion of making a sport salon or an exciting concert salon can be noticeable.
Moreover, instead of spending much money for salaries of staff, if the dean of university dedicates a part of its budget for students' researches or scholarship, both of the university and students will take advantage of this condition. A student will be able to focus on his research without any financial problem and the university can obtain international reputation due to having clever and diligent students.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that with increasing salary, the quality of professors' teaching will not change; so the most logical way for optimizing the educational system is that the university should evaluate other aspects which play an essential role in students' life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, even so, i feel, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24601366743 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88644186499 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567198177677 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1675092934 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.5 100.406767564 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3571428571 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208518139912 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773904916422 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820802557505 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126632614226 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527151274432 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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