Do you prefer to stay at one place or move around?
I, personally, believe that staying in one place is preferable to moving around. I prefer this option, simply because I’d like to stay grounded in my roots and moving around would be overwhelming to my mental health and efficiency at work. Let us discuss the same in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, I prefer to stay where I am since I find comfort in my hometown. I feel content here because this is where I grew up and moving to another place could make me feel uneasy. For instance, when I went to visit my family in the United States for two months, I felt like a fish out of water and I wanted to come back to my hometown as soon as possible.
Secondly, When a person has to move to a new place, they’d have to acclimate themselves to the new surroundings and understand the workings of that city/town. This can end up making the person feel too overwhelmed. Let me illustrate this with an example. When my sister moved to the United States for her higher education, she met with certain difficulties navigating through a new culture and following societal norms.
Additionally, Being overwhelmed while getting accustomed to a new place can also affect an individual’s mental health and also affect their efficiency at work. For example, when my cousin moved to a new city to advance his career as a business professional, he felt distressed by this change and initially struggled to solve the problems of moving such as finding a new house and transit to his workplace, all while trying to be an efficient employee.
Thus, as my concluding remark, I would like to state that, I prefer to stay in one place than to move around. I prefer this option because I do not want to undergo the pressure of moving, such as trying to find a new place to live or trying to fit in with a culture that I am not aware of.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55757575758 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72500916166 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0095849564 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296839682163 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121399748964 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152194610641 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192534448981 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13770655956 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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