Do you think we should pay attention to opinion of famous people?
Celebrities are the epitome of success for many thanks to the publicity they receive from social media and are, more often than not, imitated by those who have an insatiable desire for fame. Although they are widely adored by all people, not all people are influenced by them equally. As a matter of fact, some people may listen to well-known people and act based on their view, but I am of the opinion that celebrities are not those who have enough knowledge in different realm. In the following paragraph I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
To commence, although for majorities of people celebrities serve as an arbiters taste, morality and public opinion, they are not enough experienced and knowledgeable to assert their ideas to the public. For example, in all around the globe we are witnesses of their immoral problems. When different kind of disorders like short term relationship, drugs or alcohol are leading celebrities, mature people would think that their life is not ideal but their fans take a radically different view and disagree. In this case, in what extent people can trust their opinion while their negative impacts menace human lives.
Secondly, words of well-known people may jeopardize human beings' lives especially children. In fact, children are more likely to listen to the words of their favorite celebrities rather than their own parents. Indeed, not only should parents prevent their children listening to the celebrities but also should bend over backwards to nurture their children in order to distinguish what is proper and what is improper because celebrities do not make a secret of drug abuse and alcohol and this can provide fertile ground for children to be misled by advice of famous people.
Additionally, it is established beyond doubt that majorities of celebrities work with different brands and corporations in order to advertise their products. In this case, people should be aware of their words and suggestions because their purpose might be just making a hoard of money and try to reach their aims by highlighting something deceiving. In other word, many of them do not feel responsible toward people's life.
To wrap it up, although celebrities play an important role in every society, their words and attitude cannot be trustful. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that celebrities are ordinary people like others living on earth and due to their living condition and personality, their opinion seems not to be as effective as possible.
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Suggestion:
...ems not to be as effective as possible.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24276169265 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.146993318486 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890868596882 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0623608017817 0.046263068375 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0623608017817 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13140311804 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0289532293987 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74733467392 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0356347438753 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00445434298441 0.00188951952338 236% => OK
Determiners: 0.0601336302895 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0244988864143 0.0209618222197 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133630289532 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2537.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 411.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17274939173 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377128953771 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257907542579 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197080291971 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143552311436 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74733467392 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549878345499 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.5302476457 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6875 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8573651253 48.84282405 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.5625 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.644075263715 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 51.4782542579 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.48360655738 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22716197341 0.300154397459 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103330764447 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0638993916164 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565543000917 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156995555647 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915718514773 0.114077575197 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495726757391 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.3775534751 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0514724407154 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148917402488 0.210909579961 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410059009452 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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