Grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.
The elder, the fundamental part of population, has been valued and even triggers a heated discussion over the issue of whether grandparents are useful for their grandchildren because of dramatic change in the world during the past 50 years. Quite a few, if not a majority, believe that the elder are useless for children nowadays; on the contrary, I support that they are playing an important role for their grandchildren.
To begin with, it is grandparents who help to take care of grandchildren and save adult’s time. To be more specific, due to fierce competition in society, people between 30 to 45 are overwhelmed with their assignments in the company or from their supervisors, which allow them little time to nurture their babies. My cousin John is a perfect example to bolster my opinion. Because his parents’ special vocations, police and doctor, who were overwhelmed by a bunch of tasks and even work over time until deep night, he was sent to his grandparents and to be taken care by them so as to saving time for his parents. Only in the weekend would his parents take him back home. However, no matter how the world change, without assistance from grandparents, he would have stayed at home alone and cooked for himself, which was dangerous for a teenager and he will fell lonely without communication. Therefore, I support that grandparents are useful for their grandchildren.
Besides, never should we ignore the fact that it is grandparents who teach us to develop a healthy lifestyle. Because of plentiful life experience, they have developed a special way to keep them healthy and energetic. For example, my grandma was crazy about a traditional Chinese sport, Tai Chi, which benefits to build up a strong body and strengthen immune system. When I was a boy, I used to learn Tai Chi from my grandma and even now, I kept practice every day. Not only I can stretch my cramped muscle after sitting in front of computer in a long time, but it also helps me to clear my mind and get rid of the daily worries, which provides me a kind of meditation. However, without learning Tai Chi from my grandma, I may turn to other ways to relax like watching movies or playing video games, which will do a great harm to my eyesight and even make me feel exhausted afterwards. Thus, grandparents are useful for grandchildren on helping to form a healthy lifestyle.
Admittedly, grandparents may not provide us exact instruction in the study or jobs because of lacking professional knowledge. However, there some basic moral principles like how to deal with social relationship and how to shoulder responsibilities they can still offer of some suggestions.
To conclude, through the detailed analysis above, I am confident to maintain that grandparents have great use for their grandchildren even though the world changed dramatically in the past 50 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96907216495 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96871847836 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564948453608 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0110793425 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.842105263 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361123206951 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113418936619 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138349900881 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233522787895 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158086684307 0.0645574589148 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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