If you had to work on a project for school would you rather a work alone b work with classmates or c work with a tutor

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If you had to work on a project for school would you rather: a) work alone, b) work with classmates or c) work with a tutor.

I defined myself and extrovert who is more likely to spend time in public. Hence, my favorite style always would be work as team with a lot of different individual for this reason, If I had to choose from these options, i will definitely choose work with classmates on project for school. I have three statement why I choose this answer.
First of all, these days most companies looking for individual who can work with anyone by team understanding team goal and working for team as one experienced, skilled and geek one. Therefore, in my opinion, students should learn how to work efficient as team by working as team in any project that occurred in class. For example, in team, every individual have different roles and responsibility, if one of then is performed not enough the whole team work will fail, from this example, students should learn that how important the one's roles are. For this reason, work with classmates creating soft skill for our future.
Secondly, If I work alone, the project will limited only by my experience and knowledge but if many people enrolled on project, it will widen by different people's different knowledge. For instance, when I done group project with my classmates, the brainstorming becomes real and plenty of effective ideas came from team members because they thinks different from each other.
Last but not least, if learn something by myself alone, the knowledge will not spread enough instead if numbers of people learn something, that information or knowledge will spread like a tree branch. Thereupon, I will choose to work with classmates for developing together by learning something new from project.
In sum, for the benefits of team work, I would definitely choose my classmates to finish school project or anything that can be done as team.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... If I had to choose from these options, i will definitely choose work with classm...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'limit'
Suggestion: limit
...ndly, If I work alone, the project will limited only by my experience and knowledge but...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
...fferent knowledge. For instance, when I done group project with my classmates, the b...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...eas came from team members because they thinks different from each other. Last but n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96026490066 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65990308585 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9142085809 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366201215588 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164126078092 0.076458572812 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125119812009 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225634737982 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622780681129 0.0645574589148 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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