it is better to have abroad knowledge of many academic subjects that to specialize in one.
Knowledge has enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible ways. It utterly important to appreciate its role because it encompasses our core. Besides, it’s indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the view point that gets acquaintance in one specific subjects is more beneficial than to gets well known for wide verity of them .However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which has led me to agree with the idea that holding a plethora of information in different academic subjects are much beneficial than be specify in one. In the following essay, I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, variety of information can help aggrandize the communication skills for the person. In our contemporary society different and huge changes take place. The world economy, political, and environmental changes now are the talking of people. If we aware about positive and negative effects on people lives, we can easily been involved in any discussion that may taken place. For instance, global warming and its effect of greenhouse gases are the concern of many people and many questionable reasons to explain it, how to solve, and how to inspire countries and their government to help to overcome it. All these discussion taken place in public places and within ordinary people. Knowledge and wide Varity on information was the only saver to helps me participate in these subjects. Apparently, it must be taken inot consideration with inly specialized information I will feel more embarresment to know nothing about any other public subjects.
In addition, plenty and wide variety of information can helps us to overcome any difficulties that we can or or family member face it. For instance, I face problem in the house that I newly move to, when the water pipe start to be leaked, I never know the reasons. I thought the mistakes in the walls or due t left water on the flower of the bathrooms without dryingit. My husband, was just attend classes in the county for first home owner to teach them about the possibility to chech your own house besides the inspection experts. Although, the house was inspected and approve to be good and healthy for living, my husband and due to his knowledge about the type of pipe that mentioned in this class. Wecould overcome this problem easily and solve it before getting worest.
To sum up, after contemplating all the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I reinforce my idea that wide varity of knowledge are more beneficial then pecialize in one because it will enhance our communication skills and helps to solve any problems that may face it in this complicating life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, talking of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76991918774 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1006789932 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.681818182 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1363636364 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100538608497 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228173992999 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034245421855 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601345492008 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353323035508 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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