Everything in our changeable lives is interconnected, and no one may predict what might /may/ be important tomorrow. In this regard, personally, I am prone to believe, that events occuring all over the world are important to know, even if those events do not affect our life directly. I hold this opinion since political and social changes in the world may /might/ eventually influence our life; and no one may become a professional in any sphere without being aware of the relevant foreign developments in this or that area.
To begin with, politics is quite an unpredictable thing with increasing dynamics of changes. One of the explanations of this is that the factors which determine political and social fluctuations in our societies are often unseen or extremely complicated to be properly analyzed. This in turn forces us to monitor changes in the world to be better equipped in case of their repetition in our country. For example, the movements for the rights of women have been developing for decades in western democracies whereas in states of post-soviet region this kind of movements have evolved recently. For that reason following this kind of events will help us to better understand the importance of such activities and to support the spread of its ideas. So, the more we learn about things, the better we are prepared for the challenges we face in our own lives.
Additionally, professionals in various spheres of science may benefit from following to the developments in the areas of their specialty. This is due to the fact that knowledge and experience do not recognize borders, and what is important in one place may become as much valued in another place. For instance, when in my country legal scholars started the process of drafting of our Constitution they used the experience of other democratic states inasmuch as it was relevant to our realities. Moreover, the scholars themselves were chosen by the state taking into consideration their knowledge of foreign practices, without which the national Constitution would /have/ not become reality. Consequently, professionals in any sphere of life have to be familiar with the relevant advances in their field of expertize.
To sum up briefly, in our era we should do our best to be aware of events that take place in other places and may impact our lives one day. The explanation of this is twofold: first, the political and social events tend to repeat throughout history; second, the more we know, the higher we are valued as professionals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00714285714 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91424194645 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.7422875389 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4375 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124099687421 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439888940956 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664253667504 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789391083796 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516890206959 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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