it is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends?
In today's world, it is axiomatic that friends have a significant role in persons' life. friends not only pave the way for the development of individuals' personality but also make a significant contribution to dealing with our problems. This matter that how much people should be close to their friends and tell the truth is a controversial issue among individuals. I totally agree with this idea that it is not possible to tell the truth to friends. I feel this way for two main reasons, Which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, there are some problems in every persons’ life, which they are very personal, and people do not like to say those problems even to their close friends. Such problems are usually between the members of a family. For example, the arguments and problems between a couple are very private. Couples may say insulting words in a conflict, and it is not necessary for friends to know about them. These kinds of problems are very common between two persons who live together, but they may create a negative view for friends about the relation between the couple.
Additionally, telling the truth sometimes creates problems, and friends may get upset by hearing the truth. Some truth can shake the foundation of strong friendship and make a situation in which people lose their friends. For instance, when I was in university, I had a friend who was very close to me. We spent a lot of time together and we lived in a dormitory together. The only problem was that she was a little jealous and prevented me from having many friends or going out with others. If I went out with my classmate, she would get upset. In this situation, I would rather say a lie instead of losing and bothering her.
All in all, by considering the mentioned reasons above, I think that being always honest with friends are not essential, and it is better that sometimes keep our friends by saying lies. This is because of the fact that there are often secrets in families that the members of the family would rather keep them only between themselves, and truth sometimes disturbs people and destroy the friendships
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Friends
...ave a significant role in persons life. friends not only pave the way for the developme...
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Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...with our problems. This matter that how much people should be close to their friends...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...eep our friends by saying lies. This is because of the fact that there are often secrets in families tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73726541555 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59607699275 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520107238606 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2178565352 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174037931064 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524840521719 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654607537505 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114842174418 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511782469781 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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