No one can deny, every field is connected to internet in this digital world. This is the most challenging task to pick one because both are equally important and assist to make everyone life's comfort. In my opinion government should pay attention more in to upgrade internet. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, advance technology makes life more fast and easier. To use these electronic devices we need fast internet connection and so improvement in internet. In the past we had to work with 2g speed as it took long time to process but nowadays we have 4g internet speed and we can download or upload big files within second.This is possible only due to government action toward this technique. According to a survey it is found internet easy access and fast speed is directly proportional to the economy of that place. For example, Japan is advance in technology and hence most powerful country. This advancement is possible only due to high facility in internet speed. If you country is having focus on internet advancement, we can say it is a good decision. We can find solution of any problem. We can do fast progress in automobiles, science and technology, space research, in business, marketing. Everyone know due to covid-19, all of us staying at home and can do our office work without any difficulty and this is possible only due to good internet connection. we can arrange online meeting, which was not possible in the past. I can explain it from my personal experience. Two weeks ago, my university arrange online interview for higher educational program and thanks to smooth internet connectivity, I have passed my interview.
However, internet create a big issue- Pollution. No doubt science progress in many field even in space research, besides it produce a lot of soil and air pollution on earth as well as in space. Smoke and various greenhouse gases from rocket propulsion and access use of personal vehicle due to less comfort public transportation. Amount of gases (carbon dioxide,methane) emits from vehicle increase air pollution, noise pollution. If one have highly comfort and smooth public transport service, it surely help to reduce pollution. In contrast, in this competitive life no one want to waste his valuable time. Alternatively it is the only advance internet, which can help to resolve this problem. May be in future technology able to produce electronic devices instead of fuel bases vehicle.
In conclusion, even though public transportation is equally important in people lives, but to focus on to update internet is more beneficial because it is connected to all arenas and because it can solve major problem in future with high speed than human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99349240781 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82017519593 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53579175705 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4407950192 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5384615385 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7307692308 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190274704823 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047431255247 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481671433165 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118223919487 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031451380172 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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