Friends are like the keystones that help and motivates us to remain in shape regardless of the situations whether bad or good. Therefore, in my opinion, I disagree with the idea that it is more important to keep old friends instead of making new friends which I will illustrate in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, friends are needed in each stage of life; and old friends cannot be always beside us when we need. For instance, college students needs to make new friends in their university so that they can get help in various activities like getting notes, doing assignments, etc. The older friends cannot help the student in these activities even when they want to. Likewise, we need to make new friends while doing our jobs so that we can get direct help and co-operation. Thus, it is crucial to make new friends so that we would be in advantage.
Similarly, making new friends help to get information about the variety of cultures. This helps to quickly adapt to such cultures and tradition when we want. For instance, I have a friend named Sabin who is from Newar culture; I knew their many traditions and eating habits from him. Later, when I went to Bhaktapur for my work, it helped me a lot to adapt to that Newar culture, and it made me easier to work on that environment. So, making new friends is always beneficial.
Some might argue that keeping old friends helps to get along very easily as we have good connection with them, and also it will be easy to share our thoughts with them than with new friends. However, it is not the case; we can easily have good relation with the new friends after couple of coffee talks and can build good relationships. And also, there is always a option to get out if we don't like their behaviour.
To recapitulate, making new friends has a lot of advantages, and therefore, it is more important to make new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61011904762 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54991100452 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.002238887 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8125 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464282397797 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192083357318 0.076458572812 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139510752021 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319782241783 0.150856017488 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100031269187 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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