Loyalty is the most important quality in choosing a friend
Every person in this world has a friend which help the person whenever he is in need. therefore, what qualities a friend should to be called as a good friend becomes imperative. personally, I believe there are many other qualities rather than loyalty that a friend should have. I feel this way for two reason, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, friendship flourishes when the people involved in it are like-minded people. if the friends have similar interests and enjoys doing things together then there is a very high possibility that their friendship will become stronger and lasts long and there is no role of loyalty in this. For example, me and my friend have been friend since our childhood. we are so close to each other that we usually share all our happenings in the day to each other. our friendship have become so much stronger because we have similar thoughts regarding different things which makes us to reach a definitive conclusion and there is no discord among us. As a result, we enjoy the company the each other a lot and are able to continue our friendship till now. therefore, we should look for a friend who thinks in the way you think because in this way the friendship will flourish, which might not be possible if you look for a loyal friend.
Secondly, another important quality that a friend should have is that he should be generous. A friend of helping nature stands a stalwart to support his friend whenever some crisis occur be it lending money to friend, helping him to study etc. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. Due to strong bond of friendship, he is very helpful towards me and is always ready to get my things done if I ask him. About two years ago, I get the call from college that I need to come to college to take my degree otherwise they will not be giving it to me. Struggling to find a solution as I lived in Bengaluru and cannot take leave for going to Dehradun to get my degree I asked my friend to get my degree and then post it to me. The very next day, he went to my college and sorted out all the issues and also mailed me my degree and relieved my stress. Hence, having a generous friend is more important than having a loyal friend.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that loyalty should not only the quality which needs to be looked while making friends. this is because making friends of like-minded thinking will make the friendship lasts longer and because making a helpful friend can resolve many issues which occur from nowhere in your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54211663067 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4352279311 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477321814255 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8510672592 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0476190476 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205262445752 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752685363347 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810753826512 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144314368928 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497954216329 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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