For making long-lasting friendship which ONE do you prefer
1. Friends who help you when you need or in dire situations
2. Friends who share the same thinking and characteristics
3. Friends who trust each other
It is undeniable that almost everyone in this world has a friend. But a friend with long-lasting relationship is few. A long-lasting friend is someone who actually be with you no matter what the circumstance is, either wonderful or atrocious situation. I strongly believe that friends who fully support you in your difficult situation are the best example of well-established friendship. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will be exploring in this essay.
To begin with, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Of course, this saying means a lot to me when it comes to long lasting relationship. If a friend does not support you in difficult times, it is better not to have any friend in your life. Friends save other friend’s life by providing financial support. For example, my friend, Monika and I met in high school. Did not even realize when we became best friends in such a short time. She was the only intimate friend of mine. Although we were studying in different departments, but whenever I needed her, she was there with me. After we graduated from college, we still kept in touch with each other and promised to hold up on each other. I remember a couple of years back, I needed loan for my new house. She was the one who helped me going through all the processes and supported me financially. Not only did she help me financially but also was there for me until I moved in completely. Needless to say, Monika helped me when I lost all my dreams of living in a new house. As a result, we are still in contact with each other which proved that our friendship is long-lasting.
Furthermore, long-lasting friendship also sees some ups and downs. But if your best friend is with you, those problems will vanish before you even know. For example, Monika assisted me with moral support when I lost my sister few years back. She was the only person who stood by me and even offer to stay with her so that I could get some change. I went into complete mode of depression due to my sister’s death and was not able to come up on my own. Thanks to my best friend and our long-lasting friendship who not only guided me but also dealt with bad situation I went through. Ultimately, I realized that our friendship will never come to an end.
In conclusion, I would bet that it is utmost significant for long-lasting friendship to have a friend who help and support you at every step of your life without thinking about her schedule or routine. This is because it can not only provide you with financial support but moral support as well in your entire life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to go' or 'go'.
Suggestion: to go; go
...ew house. She was the one who helped me going through all the processes and supported...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54193548387 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6712845898 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494623655914 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4679394455 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4285714286 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6071428571 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388177090787 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116602820587 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828725463647 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271904402128 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550701213132 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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