in modern world, we should never be impolite to another person
We are living in a sophisticated age which people’s behavior has a profound impact on their lives. People are always trying to make their lives more successful, delightful and successful. Some people believe that we should not care about our behavior of other person, while others are convinced that people should not be impolite to another person. After carefully pondering it from several aspects, I strongly agree with the latter idea. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, obviously, nowadays, most people interact with each other in various fields. As a matter of fact, our life quality incredibly depends on others who we see them in different places such at universities, home and office. If we speak with them based impoliteness, we eliminate opportunities which allow us to experience enjoyable moment. To illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to numerous people who are not successful in their life due to their behavior. Hence, seldom can impolite person sustain its relationship with others and i am sure that these types of manner make weak people's friendship. Although some people say we do not have any relationship with strangers and it is not important how to interact with them, what results from great behavior is to solidify or make new friendship among people bringing them several lucrative consequences. The noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that approximately 90% of people who are prosperous in their lives, are the one who care about morality in their interaction.
The second reason why i agree with it is that, undoubtedly, impoliteness may give rise among people and eliminate people's relationship. These behaviors make people alone and nervous. People need release their stress and tensions with interaction with others. if they are impolite, others will not endure them and cut their relationship with them. The modern world offers abundant examples of people who are alone due to having bad behavior. Were i be a determiner in our country, i would have established a center to help these people to change their behavior. There is a well-known proverb in Persian, the equivalent of which in English may sound like this" the more people be impolite, the more they face problem".
TO make a long story short, no one can deny the enormous negative effect of having a relationship with an impolite person on people's lives. Not only do they increase the percentage of failure in their lives, but also it is possible that they live alone. For this reason, I highly recommended that people have a great relationship with other based on respectfulness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, well, while, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13800904977 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88334458744 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522624434389 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5681284677 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.227272727 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144650258347 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461362228116 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748730594107 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101739316291 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672472828595 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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