Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is best to have?
* Someone who is quiet
* Someone who we are similar to
* Someone who is supportive
Most people meet many neighbors throughout their life. Since the number of neighbors is increased, the diversity of their personalities is also increased. Some people love having a neighborhood that is similar to. I agree with them with two elaborated reasons below.
To begin with, having a similar person or family as neighbors can make people feel comfortable. For most common people who sleep somewhere between 10 to 12, having university students who open noisy house parties every night is not recommended at all. However, neighbors with familiar lifestyles are helpful to maintain peoples’ life patterns. For example, when I was in the army in the Korean military, I lived in a facility which is called B.O.Q. That building is a dormitory for unmarried commissioned officers so that every person who lived in there was young officers between 2nd lieutenant and captain. Living in that building was sometimes hard, but there were a lot of benefits. As everyone who lived in that facility was disciplined officers, we did not need an alarm to get up. Noisy sounds from my senior officers always woke me up in the early morning. We took breakfast together before we go to work, therefore I barely miss breakfast. In addition, as the building was located inside of the military property, we could not lighten our rooms after midnight. It helps me to take sleep at a regular time.
Secondly, similar people who live in my neighborhood are helpful to cope with difficult problems on daily basis. A similar person is more likely to undergo the problems that their neighbor meets. Therefore, they can give advice and solutions to their neighbors. To be specific, as I mentioned earlier, I was an army officer. By having senior neighbors such as a captain who commands his own company and 1st lieutenant who successfully deal with operation management, I could easily solve my daily problems in my 2nd lieutenant years. Their advice which they gave to me in our dormitory such as how to make good relationships with non-commissioned officers and how to ideally lead soldiers without controversy was extremely helpful to deal with my daily problems. In addition, after I become a senior officer, I gave a lot of advice not only to my juniors but also to my colleagues. As a result, it also worked for them successfully.
In conclusion, having similar neighbors can help people in many ways such as well-managed life patterns and advice about their problems which are hard to solve. Therefore, I insist that a similar neighbor is best among diverse types of neighbors.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96287703016 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84106325892 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517401392111 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.05528508 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9583333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241137466516 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681611722581 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639939474713 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150913309364 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388150824244 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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