Parents are important people in our lives. What do you think are the important qualities of a good parent?
Use specific details and examples in your response.
There is no shortage of opinion on the qualities that the students need to acquire in her life to be a successful person. in the given scenario, it is perceived that what attributes makes a student to refer him as a good? Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that in order to classify a student good or bad, we must take few qualities into consideration. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, first and foremost thing that a student must have is respect to their elders. To be more precise, respect is something that aid children to be in discipline. In addition, if a student do not have respect to their parents and teachers, he could not achieve their goal. Besides, student's discipline is reflected by his behaviour. For instance, whenever we meet our teacher or friends in school, the first things we do is greeting. Similarly, when our teacher teaches course in class we are susceptible to be attentive in class. Indeed, these all depicts the behaviour of an individual. By this, we can easily conclude that he has got quality to reach far in the future.
Secondly, a good student has always a seeking nature. In other word, they try to learn distinct things by any means. Additionally, they have the ability to convert every impossible matter possible. My sister is a compelling evidence of this. If ahe is not clear about subject matter in school, she communicate with her teaches for guidance unless things become understandable. She has an eagerness to learn varieties of things. Needless to say, she is in good books of every instructor at her school. Owing to this, I can envision her future that she will definetely flourish in her life.
Finally, last but not the least, good communication is imperative so as to interact with people. Additionally, everybody loves people who are amicable in nature be it teacheer, friends and so on. For example, if you are not of an open nature then it will create challenges for teacher to make you things understandable and your companion might get difficulty to spend time with you. As a result, you could not bond with your teachers and friends which eventually results you being lonely and behind in your study too.
All things considered, although there are numerous must have attributes in a good student, the fundamental ones are being able to respect seniors, always have a seeking personality and friendly in nature. If one could retain these qualities then he/she could surely be a good learner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82949308756 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78629645569 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536866359447 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6609956283 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6153846154 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121052829153 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296871437138 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030886148175 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654215814255 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308886805739 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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