In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, decision-making is of paramount importance in regular life's duties. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them in past over the present. Some people possess the conviction that the former could be more agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the letter is more amiable. I personally, content that this issue is multifaceted. Using the elder's opinion and experiences during decision-making is a basic step of wisdom. But depending on only others' decisions without respect for our opinion is dysfunction. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is, that though the family has a pivotal role in their children's lives they should trust them and not participate in their decision-making process. When the children for several issues ask their parent's opinion, they cannot make a certain decision by themselves and it makes a dreary situation for them in their future. Consider my personal experience to make the point more clear. When my sister was a teenager, she depended on my mom so much and she could not live without my mom's opinion on a basic situation. She asked her opinion about how she dressed or what she ate. She grew up, and my parents decided on what she studied at the university, she did not like her major but she was chained to their decision. Finally, she felt depressed about her life.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that depending on the family burden more responsibility on the theme. Consider that the parent is old but their son depends on them for subsistence. In this situation, they cannot effort in their life and makes an unauspicious situation for them.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I agree with this statement that today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives, and consequently, it is recommended that be independent
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 490, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elders'' or 'elder's'?
Suggestion: elders'; elder's
...t this issue is multifaceted. Using the elders opinion and experiences during decision...
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Line 1, column 548, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... experiences during decision-making is a basic step of wisdom. But depending on o...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
...ng reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is, that though the famil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05965909091 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8932326439 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8179386451 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9444444444 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406160912704 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125424741307 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117857430684 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261882447441 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698166281941 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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