People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, more people than ever choose to attend university after completing high school. Everyone has different goals by pursuing college degrees. As and when presented with the opportunity, whether I would want to choose between three reasons for attending university, I personally believe that I shall be tempted to lean toward choosing a career preparation rather new experience or increased knowledge. I think that For two important reasons, which I will express in the following essay.
First and foremost reason is finding a job is easy. University provides an opportunity to meet different peoples including but not limited to friends with similar interest, professor, and some on-campus job interviewer. These all become helpful when people search for the job. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was doing my bachelor in physical therapy, I made a lot of friends and also many professors knew me personally. After completing my bachelor, I started giving an interview. Getting a job seems difficult for me without any year of experience. Therefore, I talked to many of my friends and professor. After getting my professors recommendation, I get many job offers and I ended of choosing one. This experience, Help me to believe that it would be much harder to find a job if I didn't get a chance to meet my professor without attending college. And as a result, I believe that attending university help you to build your career preparation.
Another reason is the benefits to get good pay. There are many jobs available in the market, but if you looking for good salaries, most of them required a minimum bachelor degree. For Instance, I read an article based on job openings. It described many of the jobs even like hair saloon job, cooking job, or plumber job required a bachelor degree. The article mentions the wedges for these jobs and after reading that article I realized that they have drastic change depend on you have a degree or not. It looked like people were underpaid without a degree. And also, As per the report posted in the year 2016 by dr. John and his team proved that people who have a degree have a more reputed job with sufficient salaries compared to the people without a degree. As a result, I would believe that attending college might a good idea for career preparation.
In the nutshell, though some may choose other reasons, I think that attending university or college makes your career. Not only finding a job is easy but also, you get a well reputed job. I think every student should try to pursue a minimum bachelor degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87330316742 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73609773777 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509049773756 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0547527229 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7777777778 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3703703704 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25925925926 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282487633888 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796578581889 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676976136514 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188021147102 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412243152072 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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