People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Today’s world is full of adventures and challenges and the resources we have are limitless. People often seem to be weary while experiencing reaching goals, but the main phrase that always should be kept in mind is “never give up”. Firstly, being a motivator for ourselves is the main key that helps to endure process. Moreover, it is always obvious that hard-work and well-used time are always estimated.
To start with, when being a real model as a real motivator for ourselves truly helps us to become the ones with limitless possibilities. I can take a one example from J.K Rowling who was rejected 12 times and was told just to continue her daily normal life without writing “masterpieces” in her mind, but now I can not think of child who does not know the existence of her or of Harry Potter. Rumours and other people’s ideas can easily destroy our mental state or just our attitudes to the things. When a person has a true desire, nothing seems impossible to achieve.
Secondly, it is essential to remember it for good that everything made with all our hearts and diligence will truly become the things we will be proud of. Setting a goal is not just a phrase, it needs to be realised by the meaning of its conception. It is common knowledge, that nothing happens accidentally and without putting a lot effort on the business.
On a final note, Everyone have experienced failure even the Great people with dozens of experiences, but they did not gave up in the harsh situations that could happen in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...nd challenges and the resources we have are limitless. People often seem to be wear...
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...start with, when being a real model as a real motivator for ourselves truly helps...
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...Secondly, it is essential to remember it for good that everything made with all o...
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...e proud of. Setting a goal is not just a phrase, it needs to be realised by the ...
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...f. Setting a goal is not just a phrase, it needs to be realised by the meaning o...
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Suggestion: give
...dozens of experiences, but they did not gave up in the harsh situations that could ...
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...riences, but they did not gave up in the harsh situations that could happen in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74626865672 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71597708413 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9255311433 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100222391578 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337279466739 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384289662995 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573211466874 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264964236538 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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