People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ideas.
Most people work in order to earn money and make their livings. But some people want to help others through their jobs, and others think about expanding their community. I will give more details about the purposes of working other than just getting money.
Firstly, there are many professions that can help others. Doctors and nurses can help others get recovered from diseases, and teachers can help students learn various knowledge and techniques and grow up. For example, one of my high school classmates chose to become a math teacher. He always performed well at high school and went to a prestigious university. So he could have chosen much better-paid jobs. But he says he likes to become helpful for students. As we can see in this example, there are some people who do not chose their careers by how much they can earn money but by what they can do to help others.
As I mentioned above, there are many purposes for work, and some people give priority to other purposes than making money in choosing their careers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 407.700716846 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76536312849 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30483321995 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608938547486 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.695676398 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5454545455 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187947406959 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721822225903 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724963877533 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155393545197 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065984672575 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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