Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
friendship is a crucial relationship between society's individuals. Human from childhood to adulthood grow with their friend and spend their time with each other. Some people believe that it is very essential to person to have capability to preserve old friend for long period of time without any problem, while others hold an opposite view. In my opinion, every person should have the ability to create new friendship with new individuals soon for noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that, as over time, people have to go to new place with new circumstance and individuals that it is very vital to make new relationship with them. From the past to now, all person face different condition that cause them to move new place in order to survive or progress. Especially by advancing world now, people experience novel events with new person such as changing house or going to new city for work. For example, when I. who was really shy, was eight years old, I lived in Tehran city. my father's work was not stable that caused us to shift their home every year. when I went to school every city, I had a serious problem with how to communicate with other new students. this event led me not to live lively and became alone which even negatively affected on my courses. this experience taught me that people should learn to make new friends easily every moment.
Another reason is that when people, who do not know how make new friend, have friendship with limited person, they may confront serious issues if they end their relationship suddenly. All person has various thought for diverse problem. In every group friend there is certainty difference view that may cause them to destroy their relationship. if people can not communicate with others and make new friendship, they may face severe problem in their life. For instance, when I was in elementary school, I had close friend Ali who was impolite. he all the time bothered other pupils in order to take advantage them to do his homework. One day, I really became sad about that and decided to change his thought. However, this my interference cause us to end our relationship that took about four years from we preschool. Although I could not substitute anybody as new friend and I became alone always, he soon found new children and establish friendship and forgot me. this experience actually suffer me because if I knew how to make new friend, I never would been alone.
In conclusion, knowing how to create new friendship is very important than knowing how to maintain old friend. Not only do people can make new friend in new places, but also they never will be alone. All parents should learn their kids that how to communicate new people and make relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8195329087 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52130807795 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507430997877 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6710347945 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1153846154 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266025891449 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781523985331 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609148314106 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189875383066 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294819440676 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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