Should people do things that they do not like?
The ultimate goal of every human being in life is happiness. There some situations that contradict this goal such as doing things that are enjoyable for people. The controversial question that arises in this regard is that should people do unpleasant things. While some people are inclined toward the idea that doing unlikeable things benefits people, others are against this viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, I am of the opinion that doing things that we do not like have many advantages. In the following paragraph, I will delve into some reasons and examples justifying my point of view.
The first reason coming to my mind is that tasting unpleasant things gives us enormous valuable first-hand experiences and knowledge that would benefit us in the future. It is undeniable fact that life consists of sweetness and bitterness that means life is not a purely joyful experience. We will definitely confront some hard situations that require us to have patience and previous experiences to deal with such situations. Therefore, former tough and unpleasant circumstances would be the best weapon to cope with some difficulties. My own experience is a compelling example of this. During my teenage years, I forced by my parents to go to the capital of our country to continue my studies. At first, it was extremely tough as I had to manage all my life by myself. However, this situation made me an independent person who was successful in living in a foreign country with a myriad of hardships.
Another noteworthy reason is that it offers people an opportunity to find a wide variety of aspects of their personality including weaknesses and strengths which will be a gateway to a successful life. When experiencing new unpleasant things you put yourselves in situations that oblige you to contemplate deeply to find a solution for them. Thus, not only some of your latent talents flourish, but also by evaluating your flaws and values you are able to develop new skills. Conversely, without any doubt, if you do not leave your comfort zone you never know the hidden parts of yourselves. Back to pervious example, during living away from my family, I found how tenacious, and determined I am, while before that I thought I am a weak girl who always needs her parent's support.
To summarize, from what has been discussed above, I can conclude that by doing the things that we do not like not only we can gain numerous invaluable experiences that assist us in the future, but also it is one of the best ways to know ourselves deeply.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87990762125 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80132761078 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554272517321 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0440219369 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.65 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.65 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246518315535 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722102292245 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106938645697 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173616430448 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147195525918 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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