Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people are always in a hurry to go and get things done. Even though life is short many people want to do many things at a time. Many people always try to finish their work as early as possible to become successful. Personally I would prefer to take their time and live life at slower. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, Nowadays everyone want to become successful in their life and hence many people wants to complete their work in hurry. Especially new generation don’t want wait. My view is some what different. For example, considering student life, after the graduation completion many students prefer for master. If they rush through this thing they might take wrong decision of their life. Instead rush through things and take wrong decision, its better to take time and choose precise field rather than regret.
Secondly, although life is fast many people did so many things at the same time but it is not true. Multicasting made many mistakes. You should always concentrate on your work and preplan it before doing it. For instance, One of my friend she always try to multitasking like while driving she prefer to join her office calls through mobile. She unable to focus on driving which is dangerous for her. It’s always better to do at a time single task but not in rush.
Finally, life is short, enjoy it as per your attitude don’t rush through the situation. Another example is about stock market, some people are invest their money by reading reviews and looking at graph, even though its important but they should take their time to think and should read about company development, profile and productivity information etc. before making any investment.
In conclusion, I think people should not rush through the situation they should take their own time in order to make precise decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s in a hurry to go and get things done. Even though life is short many people want to do ma...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SOME_WHAT_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
... generation don’t want wait. My view is some what different. For example, considering stu...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...letion many students prefer for master. If they rush through this thing they might...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ight take wrong decision of their life. Instead rush through things and take wrong deci...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...r instance, One of my friend she always try to multitasking like while driving she ...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
... to multitasking like while driving she prefer to join her office calls through mobile...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
... is about stock market, some people are invest their money by reading reviews and look...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84472049689 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37773840148 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8586142109 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2857142857 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363967551352 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109531875151 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102337525116 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209268691799 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113303686875 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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