Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer?
television's effect, it has plenty of positive impacts on our life. In my opinion, movies and tv have positive effect on young people. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will eplore in the following essay.
To begin with, television can be used as a educational tool, which help students to improve their abilities as well as getting high marks in their courses. this is obvious that over watching of tv have some negative effect, but tv is not a personal thing in home, which whole family members use this device. thus, parents are able to control their cildren watching time, and make a schedul for them. As a result young people can spent a littile time on tv, and use it for important things. my own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I liked to watch a lot of
shows
and sport matches, but my parent told me that I can spend only two hour per day. As a result, I decided to use my time for science programs, and this helped me to get high scores in science and biology courses. Other learning program can help young people to behave in the best way.
Furthermure, movies and tv, at least in my country, have some rules and strong restrictions, which make national tv family friendly. there is no doubt that appropriate usage of every technological devices are necessary, but even over watch of tv programs in my country don't have negative effect. In addition, a lot of
shows
and movies are entertaining, and it is perfect for young people. Moreover, because of school's work and part time jobs, young people have a lot of stress and problem, so it would not have possible for them to get relax if there were no good
shows
and moives on the tv. thus, this can even help young people to beave very well in community.
In conclusion, I strongly belive that movies and television have positive impacts on young people behavior. this is because, tv can be used as a tool for learning. And because tv programs in the a lot of societies have restriction to produce good quality programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, at least, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59239130435 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50325284599 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502717391304 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4523722961 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9473684211 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205276021263 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660033818204 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443146228215 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997028013583 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608388880913 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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