Some people prefer to change jobs or professions during their careers. Others choose to stay in the same job or profession. Discuss the advantages of each choice. Which do you prefer? Use reasons and examples to explain your choice.
There has been no shortage of opinion on whether one should change their jobs frequently in their career or to stick with one. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely prefer to stay with one job during my career. It is my firm belief that staying at one job for longer time will help me in future for a number of reasons, and I will develop these idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, changing jobs frequently can be hard to one as they have to adapt themselves to different environment and they did not have chance to get stable in one environment. This can negatively affect their performance in their profession. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been strongly influenced by my own experience. I remember when I first started job at one company then their work time was from morning nine to evening seven and I had created my schedule in this manner. Now, when I changed to different company their work time was from morning seven to evening four and this had taken time for me to get adjusted in this schedule, as I had to change my whole day schedule and this also affected me in my performance. As a result, changing jobs frequently can affect one's performance in negative manner.
Secondly, staying at one profession or jobs provide an opportunity to one to get expert in their field and acquiring higher position in their company or field. Drawing to one of the famous example of the CEO of Google, Sundar Pichai. He started his career as a developer in google and sticking to one profession helped him getting promoted to first product manager then tech manger and finally CEO of the Google. It's certainly clear to see why sticking to one job or profession can help person to grab higher position in their field and eventually make them successful.
Now, one can take issue with claim by contending that what if one did not find their job interesting then it is not worth for them to stay in that job. Now this can be true up to some extent, but generally at the time of choosing career most of the people choose the path in which they have interest. So, this can be true for specific people and cannot be generalize for majority of group.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that staying in one profession or job could be good choice for most of people as it can help them to achieve greater height in their career and make them successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this idea' or 'these ideas'?
Suggestion: this idea; these ideas
...a number of reasons, and I will develop these idea in the subsequent paragraphs. First ...
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Line 3, column 803, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...lt, changing jobs frequently can affect ones performance in negative manner. Seco...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...d sticking to one profession helped him getting promoted to first product manager then ...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
..., but generally at the time of choosing career most of the people choose the path in w...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...fession or job could be good choice for most of people as it can help them to achieve greater ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53424657534 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51275182381 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463470319635 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.225305523 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.823529412 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218560937102 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843793826136 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568752233432 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144436273435 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441307814801 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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