Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year.
Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
The condition of enviroment such as challenges offers people a opportunity to revise our personality. Some people may think that they prefer to live with stable weather. However, I believe that to live a place with variable weather is good fo me to learn the ability of acception and evaluate adaptive ability.
First of all, the most important part of survival is the ability of acception for a person, and by living a place with variable weather, I can learn how to appreciate various views and idea. For example, within four seasons per year in Taiwan, the landscap behind my house shows different color, conveys exotic sounds from diverse animals, and grants extermely feeling with the difference in temperature. Nonetheless, to liv a place with the same weather may make people become stagnation. Because of variable weather, having more appreciation and thinking around enviroment, people can extend such logical to applicate social relationship.
Second, in the processing of living a place with variable weather, people’s adaptive ability in tough enviroment can be evaulated. That is to say that we force ourselves to stay with unfamiliar challenges, and such challenges push ours to evaluate not only the way of addressing problem in our eyes but also our views in life. For instance, living a place with variable weather, people has to adapetive to use familiar tool and eat diverse food with season changing. On the contray, living a place with unique weather, people prefer to become sturbbon because they are accoustomed to choice the same life style.
Admittedly, to live a place with unique weather let people to live a comfortable enviroment. Nevertheless, I believe the advantage overweight the disadvantage of liveing a place with variable weather. After all, such tough enviroment can make people have more ability of acception to others and evaluate the adaptive ablity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, after all, as to, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24509803922 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84053671166 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5819819692 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261673056464 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120554635279 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711330348497 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194672930208 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278119768398 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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