Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Life in a big city undoubtedly is very dynamic and fascinating. Indeed, there is a myriad of theaters, stadiums, and museums in a megapolis. Yet, as a former dweller of a large city and a current resident of a small country community, I think that life in a small town is much better. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, crimes are not common for a small community. Indeed, in little towns, the population is not numerous. All people know each other. They often gather in the local clubs and communicate closely. Because of that, people take care of each other and they keep eyes on what is going on around, which is the right way to prevent crimes. For instance, in a countryside, if people see a suspicious person wandering next to neighboring houses, they do not hesitate to call to police and announce about the odd person around. This way, the number of murders and robberies in the country communities is quite scarce. Although the life in a small town could seem boring, people appreciate the quiet and secure lifestyle there. To that end, small communities are pretty safe places to live.
Secondly, the environment in small towns is healthier than in the big ones. Traffic problems, which are common for big cities, are not a challenge for the small communities. The air in the small towns is not so saturated with carbon dioxide as in the big cities. Besides, little towns always have plenty of greenery around, which contribute to the clean atmosphere of the places. For example, after moving from Moscow to the countryside, I have never had problems with the respiratory diseases, which were regular for me to have during the lifetime in the huge city. If residents of megapolises want to improve their wellbeing, they definitely should relocate to a small town for a reason of advantageous environmental conditions.
To conclude, I personally prefer to live in a small town. This is because the life there is beneficial in the aspects of safety and health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76657060519 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71888233876 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541786743516 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3284484036 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7619047619 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5238095238 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228741026976 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673696156473 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860811722104 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142093121648 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606885747113 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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