Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Considering the best situation to spend the time, I am highly inclined to spend most of my time with my friends regarding the several advantages compared with the spending most of my time alone. Being one of the most proliferated topic among young people, spending the time with friends or alone is implied as a hard decision. Considering the associated advantages with spending time with friend such making more fun, playing the group games, preventing the monotonous condition, as well as improving the capability to enjoy among people, it is crystal clear that spending the most of time with friends has remarkable preference compared with alone one. To elaborate more on the subject mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, by spending most of the time with my friends, I have great opportunity for some games playing in the group and make more fun. For instance, with my friends, we can play most enjoyable games such as soccer, volleyball and tennis. Moreover, for some individual games that can be played in both group or individual such as bulling or shooting, we can make attractive competitions to enjoy more than playing alone. It is also worth noting that psychologically speaking, there is a causal relationship between the level of enjoyment on the one hand and the the number of group member on the other hand. For example, for some events or parties, people prefer the crowded one to share more alacrity with others.
Another primary reason can be attributed to multi-facet advantages of spending most of the time with friends to prevent bringing about any monotonous feeling. It is obvious when people play a particular game alone, the possibility to be bored even in the initial stages of their game in significant. In addition, the presence of friends can be implied as a catalyst to make substantial fluctuation in the game excitement. As a results this kind of spending time will not be indicated as a boring one.
Aside from the point I made above, spending most of the time with friends can be indicated as an opportunity to collaborate in the group. As the current psychological findings reveal, the parents are encourage to group games or spend some part of their time with their friends to enhance the capability for working in a group during their future life. For instance, children will learn how respect to the right of others.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more with the numerous advantage of spend most of my time with friends regarding the opportunity for playing group game, building a friendly competition and enhancement of capability to play a perfect role in a group. Although, spending most of the time with friend for entertainment aspect outweigh spending most of the time alone, to my best knowledge, for some activities such as studying or meditation, I prefer to be alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... level of enjoyment on the one hand and the the number of group member on the other han...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... level of enjoyment on the one hand and the the number of group member on the other han...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
... fluctuation in the game excitement. As a results this kind of spending time will not be ...
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Line 8, column 201, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...ogical findings reveal, the parents are encourage to group games or spend some part of th...
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Line 8, column 211, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grouping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: grouping
...dings reveal, the parents are encourage to group games or spend some part of their time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98559670782 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80201059198 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438271604938 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8577076303 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.611111111 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470996917999 0.236089414692 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182930806344 0.076458572812 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131473243363 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320499498563 0.150856017488 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111485128112 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.