Some people like to spend their money as soon as they earn it, while others think it is better to save their money for some time in the future. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do not use memorized examples
money is crucial part of a person life which means it is a basis to provides fundamental needs of life. some probably prefer to spend their money right away however, I personally believe that it is better to save money for some time in the future. In the following essay I intend to put forth my arguments to support my view.
To begin with, saved money can be spend for the future education. education is very crucial for a person life and in United higher education is very expensive. Many students do not go for higher studies because they cannot afford highly paid tuitions. therefore, it is better to save money rather than spending it right away. my own experience is a compelling illustration of this. when I was a teenager, my mom was accustomed to give me fifty dollars as a pocket money. Since, I was already working as a part time in a library, so I had enough money at that time which means I usually saved my extra pocket money. when my university started, I had enough savings to pay my semester tuition fees. As a result, I did not need to work overtime and I graduated in four years. this would not have been possible if I did not start to save money during my teenage. therefore, it is very beneficial to save money rather than spending it immediately.
In addition, life is very unpredictable which means saved money can be used for these rainy days. Sometime incidents happen, and people are in dire need of money. this is very crucial time for a person and at that time our extra money is life saving for us. To exemplify, my friend had a car accident and she was visiting the USA at that time. she did not have any insurance which is why she had to pay a huge amount of money. Thanks to her extra money that she had in her savings. she was able to pay her hospital bills in time otherwise she had to face some worse consequences of debt, bad credit score and also her family financial conditions could have gone worse.
In conclusion, I think it is better to save money for the future rather than spend it immediately. this is because saved money can be spent for the future education which is very important, and because the saved money is very helpful in emergencies of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46798029557 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47057963663 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453201970443 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3417479096 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8695652174 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.652173913 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288161335025 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939823179666 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804488300851 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204651155792 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357983747751 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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