Some people like to spend their money as soon as they earn it, while others think it is better to save their money for some time in the future. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Managing money is a vital skill that everyone should acquire in today’s modern life. Although some people prefer to spend their money immediately after earning it, I personally believe that it is prudent to save money for the future and stick to a budget. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, saving money helps me handle emergencies. Life is full of unpredicted events which may negatively affect my financial status. I would be less worried if I know I have backup options for those days. My own experience is a compelling example of this. During the coronavirus pandemic, my company experienced a severe financial situation and temporarily suspended some of its employees, and I was one of them. I could not make money for almost six months, and I was under a lot of pressure. Fortunately, I had some money in my bank account that I had saved for years, and that amount of money was enough for living during those days. I would not have handled that situation financially if I had not saved my money.
Secondly, a large amount of money is needed to fulfill some special needs. My monthly income is limited and does not cover all of my needs. Consequently, I have to save my money and make a deposit to reach a sufficient level to buy some great things I want. For instance, I always have planned to buy a house, but my monthly income is not enough for it. Therefore, every month I put forty percent of my paying in my bank account and spend the rest on my daily needs. Hopefully, Next year I can buy my dream house with my saved money. Until then, I have to manage my finance.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that saving money is a wise decision. This is because I can manage unexpected financial situations in the future, and saving helps me provide great things.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59561128527 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61905425117 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5741587378 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231451006679 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792347666153 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822496660096 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161332036384 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888258166918 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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