Some people argue that playing team sports provides people with more benefits as opposed to participating
in individual sports. Personally, I believe that both types of sports can provide a range of benefits to people,
and it depends on what benefits each individual wishes to achieve as to which sport they should choose to
play.
On the one hand, team sports, such as football and basketball, provide a number of benefits to those who
play. For example, team sports give players the opportunity to develop interpersonal skills, like teamwork
and communication skills, which will not only help people in their day-to-day social interactions but also
benefit them in their workplace. In addition, team sports also offer players the chance to develop a sense of
unity, friendship, and sportsmanship between teammates, which can really add value to people’s lives by
making them feel a part of something.
On the other hand, individual sports, like tennis and swimming, also have their merits. When someone plays an individual
sport, it usually gives them more opportunities to enhance their personal skills, such as being able to manage emotions,
cope with stress, and build confidence and self-esteem. When people are playing an individual sport, they usually have no
one else to rely on for support during the game or match, and therefore, individuals will need to develop a strong mindset
to be able to deal with and overcome any setbacks they may face. Individual sports also provide better opportunities for
people to challenge themselves by setting goals and achieving personal bests.
Overall, I feel that all sports offer great benefits for people’s mental and physical health, and that people
should choose whatever sport they are most interested in playing.
- The ability to learn more than one language will be less important in future Do you agree or disagree 77
- We should introduce laws to make businesses and state services employ equal numbers of male and female workers in every department or area of the company 78
- The charts below show the number of girls per 100 boys in all levels of education 67
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74091165618 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6107903199 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.53405017921 375% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30125541517 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133210826661 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484447335393 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974160432325 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054619153461 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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