Some prefer to eat at restaurants, while other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home.
People have been divided into their preferences, whether to take meal at home or at restaurants. One group like to have their meal in restaurants and spend time with their friends. While, the other group prefers to eat homemade food and spend with their family members. I personally like to have meal in my home along with my family members. I prefer this for few reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
First of all, having meal at home give the scope to spend time with family members so that we can discuss different matters in a congenial way. In this age of information technology, everyone is busy with their virtual life and they have very few time to take care of their family members & relatives. Therefore, eating food at home give us the opportunity to interact with each other and know about the family members so that we can take appropriate measures. Having take meal at home also facilitates to grow strong bondage among family members. I have a compelling example of this. Few months back, my younger brother was facing a problem in his job place. Then one day while having dinner together with family members, he discussed the matters and ultimately upon our decision, he left the job and now doing his business. It was possible to take the right decision, as having dinner together gave him the opportunity to share his problems.
Secondly, preparing meal at home assure the freshness, which is mandatory for leading healthier life. Sometimes, the restaurants and hotels does not maintain the standard of food quality and it serve adulterated food to customers, which is very harmful for the consumers. But, the foods is prepared at home with utmost care, whose main target is to have necessary nutrients in that food and this enables us to maintain a happy and healthy life.
Finally, the cost of food is also another factor, why I like home made food. Usually, the prices of foods in restaurants are very costly, so that everyone can't afford to have their meal there. We can minimize or food expenditure by preparing food in our home.
In conclusion, my preference is to prepare meal at home and eat together with family members. This is so because it helps to make the strong bondage among family members. The home made food are also safe as well as cheaper in compare to foods of restaurants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a congenial way" with adverb for "congenial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o that we can discuss different matters in a congenial way. In this age of information technology,...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...h their virtual life and they have very few time to take care of their family members & ...
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Message: Did you mean 'serves'?
Suggestion: serves
...ain the standard of food quality and it serve adulterated food to customers, which is...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rants are very costly, so that everyone cant afford to have their meal there. We can...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per in compare to foods of restaurants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75615763547 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52557862885 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472906403941 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1082624823 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7727272727 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303785177151 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102886828295 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10322881069 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202627456321 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688001051238 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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