For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities.
Questions surrounding whether the education of very young children is important or the universities have been ongoing these years, since the governments have limited budgets and something like corona crisis could influence the economic situation easily, therefore it is necessary they manage their budget so well. some people believe that the education of very young people is much more important than universities, Because they think that each experience including education in those ages, plays an important role in foundation of the human characteristic. But I think government should pay more attention to the universities for some reasons which are pinpointed in the following.
First and foremost, I think parents should accept some responsibilities for education of their kids through home schooling or some thing like that. In my opinion, parents have an important effect on their kids in their early life and they should devote some parts of their daily life to them. For instance, my friends son, believes his mother is the creator of the universe! in this case, nobody could forgo the importance of his mother in his life including educational experiments.
Secondly, universities prepare students for industry, and the more educated the students, the more growth of industry. may be you ask why the growth of industry is important? the answer is development of the industry is the key of strengthen of the economy and economy has a direct affect on citizen daily life and etc.
In conclusion, by taking account all the above reasons and many others, I strongly believe that governments should pay more and more attention to universities in comparison with education of very young children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31985294118 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89300393669 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2658646088 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.7 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 5.45110844103 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253253148601 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102125898482 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597600377469 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159119044978 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516683535967 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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