TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I disagree with the prediction that there will be fewer cars in use twenty years later than today. Cars will still be an essential means of transportation like today and the number of cars in service will be more in next twenty years than present.

First, cars is a crucial means for commuting today. Cars have the advantage of cheap, fast and comfortable traveling. Driving a mobile sometimes is cheaper than bus, which is also faster than bus because bus has to stop at every stop. Therefore, people drive cars to work, to school and to shopping everyday. This pattern will remain in the next twenty years.

Second, cars will be still pervasively used in the future because it is the most fuel efficient way of traveling. Some may predict that flying or plane will be popular in the future. However, flying consumes more energy than driving a car on road because the process of flying requires immense energy to overcome gravaty. Thus, the way of transportation by car will be the prodominate means of commute.

Last but not the least, there will be more cars in use in the future than today. According to a report form major car manufactory, there is a huge market in developing countrys, which includes almost 5 billion population who need a car to commute. Therefore, the quantity of cars will be increasing in the next twenty years.

In conclusion, I can predict that there will be more cars in service in twenty years than today. The advantages of cars enable it to be the main choice of transpotation in the future.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e in next twenty years than present. First, cars is a crucial means for commu...
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...cars to work, to school and to shopping everyday. This pattern will remain in the next t...
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...ill remain in the next twenty years. Second, cars will be still pervasively u...
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...el efficient way of traveling. Some may predict that flying or plane will be popular in...
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...e the prodominate means of commute. Last but not the least, there will be mo...
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...ncreasing in the next twenty years. In conclusion, I can predict that there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73134328358 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58663649346 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492537313433 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295499971038 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125373607242 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104538855496 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205153951711 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091029293245 0.0645574589148 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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