The world, nowadays, witnesses a huge evolution in technology. Many of new invention participate in making our life much easier than before. Some people believe that the life is becoming more comfortable than the previous decades. Personally, I agree with this idea for the following reasons.
First, with the noticeable development of the transportation field, the travel around the world became an easy thing. Besides, it saves a lot of efforts. Contrary to the past era where the cars where limited and some people, especially in the developing countries, used the animals like horses and camel in their trips between villages, today, there are myriad of fast transportation methods that made the travel an enjoyable thing. For instance, my grandmother told me that they were suffering in the past because the lack of cars in the village where she lived, so, they were depending on a limited of cars, which came from nearby cities to bring the goods, as the main way of traveling. She remembered that it was difficult for them to travel, besides, they spend large time on the road. thus, she is really thankful for the modern way of transportation.
Second, the invention of the internet, made a huge difference in our lives, particularly in the communication aspect. It connected the world as if it is a small town. Nowadays we can talk and see our family or friends through video calls. Moreover, these technologies helped us to save a tremendous amount of money. Furthermore, we can study, attend conferences and courses by using the internet while we are at home. Thus, one can say that the new network connections made our lives more convenient. For instance, during the last year I traveled to China to pursue my master degree in bioinformatics, at the start I thought that it will be hard to go far from my home. but actually, I was able to talk with my parents and friends every day, that was really helpful and participate in relieving much of my stresses.
In conclusion, many factors are interacting together to make the living on the earth more comfortable than the previous time. Some of them are the transportation system and the other one is the internet. Accordingly, it is acceptable to say that today's life is much easier than our grandparents' life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...a huge evolution in technology. Many of new invention participate in making our life much eas...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...rips between villages, today, there are myriad of fast transportation methods that mad...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...n the village where she lived, so, they were depending on a limited of cars, which came from n...
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Line 3, column 792, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...des, they spend large time on the road. thus, she is really thankful for the modern ...
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Line 5, column 671, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...it will be hard to go far from my home. but actually, I was able to talk with my pa...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...cordingly, it is acceptable to say that todays life is much easier than our grandparen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89147286822 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86223973858 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560723514212 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.486125918 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129703087043 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379791862426 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500201034695 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993905348281 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619954835848 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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