TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task
I agree with the statement that Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. There are three reasons and examples to support my opinion.
First of all, In my point of view, the technology, in general, provides many informations that can be essential to us, in search, assigments, options of products, another things. For example, last week my mother was sick and have not a doctor avaible to atend her, only if much necessary; like was not the case, I needed acess the Internet and see what was the better thing to do that moment to my mother, and I gave the answer. I consider that the information of Internet was much important and valuable to me.
In the second place, in my opinion, nowdays the Earth do not exist without technology, and of course, the Internet, part of context about technology. It is much necessary the role of Internet to sent information, to give e-mail about something, to help people, other infinites cases. For example, this week, a Chinese man looked his daughter lost to 24 years. The daughter could met her family through of social net. It is a clean example that Internet can have important informations.
Thrdly, some people could desagree with me, but I have seen the Internet like a form of anex my informations that I can lost in a normal day. With a good aplicative of securuty, our infomations can be anexates with out many problems. For example, all my assigments I gave in a Google Drive and always that I need, I turn in my computer and acess my page to see what I want.
In conclusion, there are my reasons to support my opinion about the statement "Internet provides people with a lot valuable information". I agree that the Internet much acess to informations can create problems, even though, can not be comparate with a lot good informations that the Internet can give for us. Problems are consequences of sad person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons and examples to support my opinion. First of all, In my point of view, the t...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'meet'
Suggestion: meet
...er lost to 24 years. The daughter could met her family through of social net. It is...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...form of anex my informations that I can lost in a normal day. With a good aplicative...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...curuty, our infomations can be anexates with out many problems. For example, all my assi...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r and acess my page to see what I want. In conclusion, there are my reasons to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, another thing, for example, in conclusion, in general, of course, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86421190304 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50303030303 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2020237168 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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