Everyone has their own opinion about education as it depends on many factors and circumstances, so, the view point on this may vary from person to person. But is it necessary to always have broad knowledge of many subjects than to specialize in one subject? Well some people think that it is good for the students to have knowledge of variety of subjects as it will increase their chances of success. However, I do not concur with this notion for the following reasons.
First, in today’s modern world students have less time and vast syllabus to study anyway that makes it difficult to focus on many subjects at a time. Although, it might be better for a student to master many subjects as it provides more opportunity to get success but it is not possible and practical. I can say this strongly because I have seen my younger brother struggling to study many subjects in his high school. He could not do justice with all of them and it even affected his grades. Later, he decided to just focus on science and took it as a major in his college and I was astonished to see the improvement in his grades. This incidence made me realized that it is essential to be practical in life as well and to see if one has time and energy to pay attention to many subjects or not.
Second, nowadays it is necessary to have expertise in something as there is cut throat competition everywhere. People who are very good at something and can prove themselves better than their peers are capable of getting good jobs or potential opportunities in life. If one has little knowledge about everything then it would be quite difficult to get a good job for example a high school student cannot get a good job as a student who has done his masters in management or in medicine can get. Hence, it is evident by above examples that it is extremely important to have command over one particular subject to have a bright future.
To sum up, I would like to state that if a person is extraordinarily brilliant and has plenty of time then she/he should definitely pursue studying variety of subjects at a time but if a student who is neither interested nor has the ample amount of time to study as she/he might have other issues like family responsibilities then it would be absolutely waste of time and energy to simply study many subjects when one can instead easily master one thing and make promising future in it.
Discourse Markers used:
['anyway', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208242950108 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.167028199566 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0976138828633 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058568329718 0.046263068375 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0780911062907 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130151843818 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0173535791757 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.65154130579 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0498915401302 0.0309702414327 161% => OK
Particles: 0.00433839479393 0.00188951952338 230% => OK
Determiners: 0.0520607375271 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0303687635575 0.0209618222197 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00867678958785 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2406.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 432.0 408.028673835 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56944444444 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3125 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233796296296 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157407407407 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0972222222222 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65154130579 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497685185185 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.7542544015 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 28.8 20.5533526081 140% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.1407764109 48.84282405 197% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.4 120.699889404 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.5533526081 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.644075263715 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 52.1796296296 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.17142857143 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416742670157 0.300154397459 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11010229067 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0733752833064 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546942450649 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168966273828 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188352239781 0.114077575197 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930624676839 0.0781384742642 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36904773005 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0658555105772 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29742588494 0.210909579961 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602550685087 0.0618886996521 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.