Nowadays, traveling and going on vacation alone or with a tour involve many challenges for everybody. Despite the fact, some people believe tour guide is the best ways for traveling, some other think going on travel by alone is the best way for people to go travel and have a leisure time. As far as I concern, I strongly support former group by following reasons.
The first thing that immediately comes to mind is that safety. People and tourist who travel in other countries or foreign area, do not have a lot of information and knowledge about foreign people, relationship, areas and so on or sometimes people have a big challenge in foreign countries about crime and people who doing illegal actions. Additionally, traveling by tour can save people and improve the security because every tour has a person who familiar with the condition of place where they want to go. So, in an optimistic glance, we can consider people in a tour have a more immunize.
In addition, the majority of people when they go on vacation and traveling by tour guide, they can make a new friend. It is undeniable that people on the tour guide, do not communicate with each other. Some people has a problem and they need to ask others. I believe that in a tour if people do not like to communicate, it makes them anxiety and spiritlessness. Furthermore, people on tour need to share knowledge with each other and also talk about current journey such as sightseeing, places where they want to go. As a result, it makes people very motivated to improve their communication.
Lastly, the other advantages of traveling by tour are that people get to gather and have more enjoyable time. Most of the people on the tour have a good relationship with each other and spend fun time during traveling and visiting the new place. For example, last month my mother and I went on vacation by tour and I remember we had the best time with the tour's people we playing joke each other or we could go on walking near the beach. Hence, by improving our communication we can overcome anxiety and boring time.
To make it brief, I am of the conception that traveling by tour has more advantages such as immunization and I believe that it is more fun to go by tour and improving the relationship with other people. Consequently, traveling by tour makes people forget their problem and have a nice time and I think the government should support people who travel by tour as sightseeing and other entertainment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a familiar'.
Suggestion: who is a familiar
...ecurity because every tour has a person who familiar with the condition of place where they ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241090146751 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.165618448637 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859538784067 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398322851153 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0587002096436 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132075471698 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0314465408805 0.0351676179071 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71691714098 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0230607966457 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.083857442348 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125786163522 0.0209618222197 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167714884696 0.0139019557991 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2473.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 436.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67201834862 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30504587156 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217889908257 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144495412844 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110091743119 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71691714098 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428899082569 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.6068977508 59.2087087015 79% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9473684211 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.845447603 48.84282405 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.157894737 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 44.7363592467 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.53174603175 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317526824843 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115766986497 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0842258452132 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.549722954871 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16903393534 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137183667477 0.114077575197 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562835694654 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.400293599992 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0950390761949 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236085032306 0.210909579961 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357665548043 0.0618886996521 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.