Do you agree or disagree with this following statement the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
Use specific reason and example to support your answer
tour guide people is a mandatory demand in traveling . I prefer go to vocation with person who know's the place better than i go bu myself. i choose this for two reason. which i will explore in my essay.
first of all, human nowadays moving a lot between countries around the world. Some of them visit the place first as a tourist to check the suitability of this area to his demand. other population are visiting new countries for vocation. When we travel with guy who knows the place well that's will help us build a good idea about the place. so, we can make a correct judgment and make our decision precisely. about five years ago, i went to london, i traveled with my cousin who used to live in london for six years. he showed me all beautiful museum, aquarium, and old castles. Also i created a nice clue about my project. which i admitted to publish in United Kingdom. my work done perfectly and i appreciate Michel( my cousin) for assistant.
Secondly, tour guide can save our money, time, and make sure we are safe. tour guide can take us to good restaurant, hotel, and entertainment places with reasonable price. which can cost us a lot of cash and efforts looking for those places by ourselves may take forever and may people in those cities a knowledge us as a tourist. so, they will take more from us. For instance, I went to Canada last year with my husband and kids. we arrived to airport and we asked about a hotel. they sent us to very expensive one because the hotel has an affiliation with flying company. As a result we lost money, which in turn, hinder us from visit Victoria lake because we do not have money any more.
Finally, visiting countries AND moving around THE world is so much fun if we act wisely. tour guid is best option if we plane to visit a new area since we do not know a bout it. he will recommended best places with least cost . that;s why i agree with statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4011299435 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34334321366 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1042812816 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9230769231 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.5376344086 758% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139655060061 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434849888345 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544139190272 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104236010927 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04137485151 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 11.7677419355 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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