In the twentieth century, there is the huge competition between the companies and they stated advertisements as a tool to overcome from that and to improve their product sales. Even though it is not ideal for everyone, some people believe that ads are the negative impact on society in the public prospect but others think it is good for companies to improve their sales. Personally, I am off convicted that ads play a key role in the sales of the marketed products and I agree with the statement. The repeated advertisement for the same product attracts the people and it creates enthusiasm to buy that product in addition to that it helps companies to improve their product sales.
To begin with, when we are watching the broadcast, the company advertises their product middle of the programmed to attract more customers. When we saw that publicity they mainly highlight the advantages of the product and enclose the drawbacks as a result we all attract to buy that product. For example, when I was studying graduation, I was more likely to watch the soccer game every day. While watching that game on the television they advertise a car in the middle of the game. Since I watching the same add every day I forced my dad to buy that car even though there are no specifications in that car. If I did not watch that advertisement, I might not request my dad for that car.
Second, Publicity is important for every market product, if not most of them they don't know about that although it is a good product. For example, every year apple release the new version of the I phone and everybody knows that and that had been a top company since decades but still they advertise their product because if not most of the people don't know about their product.
In conclusion, advertising a products having both pro and con's but it all depends on the society. For companies, it is good for sale their product and it helps people to try newly updated goods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...elps people to try newly updated goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64161849711 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60149002352 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465317919075 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.620886731 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128651313392 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545900964476 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036679810277 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840366807998 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208259771597 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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