It is often said that, many people have different views from the word success. The best meaning of success which nowadays individuals feels is to do well in the life. However, success walks around not far away just depends on people how they wants to gain success in their jobs either through knowledge or through abilities to communicate well with people. About the statements which says, success in coming days job depends on having well interaction with people rather than studying hard in school. Disagreeableness cross my mind. For several reasons. First, study hard in school the rest will be easy. Secondly,knowledge will also improved.
stated roughly, school subjects will make a person more experts in each and every aspect. wheres, interaction with people may be able to make an image regarding someone about his personality and behavior in people mind. however, study hard in school could help us to be more conscious about knowledge. For instances, if an employee wants to apply for the job in a company its is obvious owner of the company will ask first of all, about his knowledge. On contrary, he will not ask about his behavior that how he is doing either bad or well with people. indeed, employee will faced questions regarding interaction at the end of interview. Evidences suggests, nowadays people prefer to increase their knowledge until they became success in life jobs. Even though, knowledge really make the life steadily for living. more knowledge the greater relaxation will appeared to people life.
In addition, improvement in knowledge will maintain people life stable. However, being as literate, it is important for individuals to consume more time about study in university or school. Because enough education would led them to be more successful in their life. Also they will be able to chose the ways of success without hesitation. Furthermore, if I talk about the owner of a company which i was working for 2 years there, he was not suffering from good interaction with employers. On the other hand, employers respected him a lot because he was expert in the management of company. Thus, by looking at his sufficient knowledge everyone respected him.
To take all in consideration, it feels good whenever someone do thrive in their school study because to be success in ahead jobs. Moreover, welfare would raise in their life to live relax. As well as, education level would also increased for arranging success jobs in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ar away just depends on people how they wants to gain success in their jobs either th...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e well with people. About the statements which says, success in coming days job d...
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Line 1, column 615, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , knowledge
...n school the rest will be easy. Secondly,knowledge will also improved. stated roughly, sc...
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Line 1, column 636, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...l be easy. Secondly,knowledge will also improved. stated roughly, school subjects will ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Stated
...Secondly,knowledge will also improved. stated roughly, school subjects will make a pe...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wheres
... more experts in each and every aspect. wheres, interaction with people may be able to...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: where's
... more experts in each and every aspect. wheres, interaction with people may be able to...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ersonality and behavior in people mind. however, study hard in school could help us to ...
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Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that how he is doing either bad or well with people. indeed, employee will face...
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Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Indeed
... doing either bad or well with people. indeed, employee will faced questions regardi...
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Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...either bad or well with people. indeed, employee will faced questions regarding ...
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Line 2, column 577, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...ll with people. indeed, employee will faced questions regarding interaction at the ...
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Line 2, column 816, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: More
...ally make the life steadily for living. more knowledge the greater relaxation will a...
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Line 2, column 859, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'appear'
Suggestion: appear
...e knowledge the greater relaxation will appeared to people life. In addition, improveme...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me about study in university or school. Because enough education would led them to be m...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... school. Because enough education would led them to be more successful in their lif...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...em to be more successful in their life. Also they will be able to chose the ways of ...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...talk about the owner of a company which i was working for 2 years there, he was n...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for 2 years there, he was not suffering from good interaction with employers. On...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...eration, it feels good whenever someone do thrive in their school study because to...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
... As well as, education level would also increased for arranging success jobs in the futur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03170731707 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69549715962 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509756097561 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8542703057 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4074074074 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1851851852 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235763084055 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667638218989 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548381331188 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158402946845 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622343464821 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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