Some people might consider making new friends more important than keeping old friends. I believe it is more crucial to keep our old friends. In our life, as it progresses, we will be separated from them at some point in time and inevitably have to make new friends. But this doesn't mean we forget our old friends. In the following essay, we will examine why I feel this way.
First, with our old friends, we have spent a considerable amount of time with them. This has led to a stronger bond between us. We might not feel as open with our new friends as we would with our old friends as we have known them for years. Also, after our parents, we are closest to our old friends. So, if we have some kind of problem - mental or personal - we can share it with them. We can't share it with a new friend because we might not be still sure if he is trustworthy or not. We might also feel uncomfortable sharing personal problems with them. For example, I was in a relationship a few years ago. We had some issues, and I was not sure how to deal with them. I was even not comfortable sharing with this my parents, but I was with my old friend. We discussed the thing, it helped me feel relaxed and at last, we came to a solution, and all sorted out perfectly. In this case, If I would not have been in touch with my old friend then it would have been really difficult for me.
Second, an old friend can help us in our careers. All of us are always concerned about our careers and so are our friends. After a few years, no one knows where one will reach. Our old friends would be working in different cities and different industries. In future, if we need any type of help in finding a job, starting a business, etc. they can help us out. For example, after my graduation, I was not able to find a job. My friend from high school was working in a domain the same as mine in a well-reputed MNC. I reached out to him for a referral. He was more than happy to give me one. It helped me give a shot in that company and, luckily, I got the job. If I had not maintained a good relationship with him after high school, I would be hesitant to ask him for this and, probably, I would have not gotten this job.
So, for these reasons, I feel it is important to keep our old friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ably have to make new friends. But this doesnt mean we forget our old friends. In the ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ersonal - we can share it with them. We cant share it with a new friend because we m...
^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ferent cities and different industries. In future, if we need any type of help in finding...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, still, then, well, for example, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14739229025 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35765354421 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439909297052 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4780520991 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9666666667 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96666666667 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156121649143 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528562387105 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633024802311 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115522752672 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388252639692 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 11.7677419355 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 10.9000537634 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.