TPO-30 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use spec

Division of time during doing any jobs is a crucial issue. From the ancient times, there have been a issue while allocating working time for a worker. In the issue, whether it is better to have work for three days a week work with long hours or five days a week with shorter hours, personally, I agree with working for 5 days with the shorter duration.

First, we all know that in exam rather than reading whole night before the exam is not beneficial as reading by piecemeal for shorter hours from beginning of the semester. This issue accord with the work related to hours. As human is not a machine, they need a break. Doing a long hours jobs is so monotonous, so they can't concentrate to their work. However, if they are provided by shorter duration work with breaks, they can perform it better. Five days works provide them longer and frequent breaks so they can concentrate in time. for instance, while I was given a work to do in 1 month, I started early and made it possible to finish in time whereas my friend Hari started only 5 days before the dead line. So the work done by him was not so good as compared to me due to overload, pressure.

Compliance can be another reasonable grounds. Imagine business organization, institutions, bank open only for 3 days a week. In this case, there may be of overload of the problem, due to numerous customer, customer may bustle each other, creating a havoc like environment in the institution. It brings many problem like customer dissatisfaction, busy hours during the working days, pressure on employee.

However, some may argue that providing 3 days work will provide a numerous vacation days, but I still insist for providing work for days a week. If 3 days of work will be provided, we will have copious number of holidays- four days. It may makes us lazy, because four days holidays is not so good. The case where number of holidays days is higher than working days may affect the country economy because most people are just sitting in their home idling.

Finally, rendering of 3 days holiday may have serious impact: economical hindrance of county, making a chaos during a office hours, provides pressure to employee. Therefore, there, I believe, is many advantage while providing the office working hours with 5 days along with shorter duration.

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Average: 5.5 (4 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...From the ancient times, there have been a issue while allocating working time for...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ng hours jobs is so monotonous, so they cant concentrate to their work. However, if ...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...n work with breaks, they can perform it better. Five days works provide them longer an...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...breaks so they can concentrate in time. for instance, while I was given a work to d...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e number of holidays days is higher than working days may affect the country econ...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...drance of county, making a chaos during a office hours, provides pressure to empl...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...ployee. Therefore, there, I believe, is many advantage while providing the office working hour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72098765432 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54243545683 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516049382716 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2979171901 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0476190476 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365172302372 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107168631112 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09333211494 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216357436991 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113362983441 0.0645574589148 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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