TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s drawn lots of attention during a long period of time due to the impacts it has on peoples li...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...it has on peoples lives. Depending on a persons personality, experiences and even emoti...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... if a worker does the same job, he gets bored of what he does resulting in lack of effic...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...works as a driver for the same company. While the other one do the same office job al...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ne do the same office job all day long. if you were in their shoes, indeed, you wo...
^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ume is all the thing that is matter. So these kind of workers can take advantage of their ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, by and large, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2560.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61261261261 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43591075961 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464864864865 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7715670757 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.304347826 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1304347826 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82608695652 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293311216723 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916111815248 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817576007195 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183904390586 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298730855605 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s drawn lots of attention during a long period of time due to the impacts it has on peoples li...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...it has on peoples lives. Depending on a persons personality, experiences and even emoti...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... if a worker does the same job, he gets bored of what he does resulting in lack of effic...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...works as a driver for the same company. While the other one do the same office job al...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ne do the same office job all day long. if you were in their shoes, indeed, you wo...
^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ume is all the thing that is matter. So these kind of workers can take advantage of their ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, by and large, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2560.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61261261261 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43591075961 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464864864865 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7715670757 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.304347826 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1304347826 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82608695652 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293311216723 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916111815248 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817576007195 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183904390586 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298730855605 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.