Nowadays the job market demands always more often multitasking people. Personally, I believe that to be able and have a job that includes many different types of task to do is more satisfactory than doing the same mansion every workday. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, job takes most of the daytime in a working life, it is very important for a worker to be satisfied and happy with what a person does during the work day, and diversify the work day doing many different things is the best way to avoid to get bored and lower the efficiency on the tasks he or her have to do at the end of a workday. My own experience is a compelling example of this, when I worked for e-company which was selling sport items on internet, I was in charge of the photographic studio, my job required to do many different things, for example, prepare al the items, organize the shooting with the models, using photoshop to prepare the photos to publish and many other little things that made my workday runs very fast, if I had just to shoot all day, probably I would gotten bored very soon, like that time when I had to take the place of a coworker the expedition office, I spent the whole day packing items for delivering, It was so boring, I could not do that monotasking job for more the few days.
Secondly, have many different tasks is an opportunity to learn new skills, nowadays the job market always requires multitasking people, therefore, be able to do different mansions will improve the chances to get a better or new job. For example, when I was looking for a part-time job during my university years, I got a job in a call center only because they also needed a person capable to use design software such as Photoshop, Illustrator and excel too. Fortunately, I had all of these skills and they gave the job right away and in no time I learned other new skills, and my pays increased a lot.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that to be multitasking is a very important skill to get a good job in the modern job market, and also very important for business people to give their employee the possibility to diversify their work day, because in this way they will be efficient in their daily duties and therefore it is beneficial for both workers and businessmen.
My own experience is a
My own experience is a compelling example of this, when I worked for e-company which was selling sport items on internet, I was in charge of the photographic studio, my job required to do many different things, for example, prepare al the items, organize the shooting with the models, using photoshop to prepare the photos to publish and many other little things that made my workday runs very fast, if I had just to shoot all day, probably I would gotten bored very soon, like that time when I had to take the place of a coworker the expedition office, I spent the whole day packing items for delivering, It was so boring, I could not do that monotasking job for more the few days.
Amazed by it's only one sentence. Or was the commas dot?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...to be able and have a job that includes many different types of task to do is more satisfactor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t a person does during the work day, and diversify the work day doing many differ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... day, and diversify the work day doing many different things is the best way to avoid to get ...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid getting'.
Suggestion: avoid getting
...any different things is the best way to avoid to get bored and lower the efficiency on the t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sks he or her have to do at the end of a workday. My own experience is a compelli...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tographic studio, my job required to do many different things, for example, prepare al the ite...
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Message: Did you mean 'have gotten' or 'get'?
Suggestion: have gotten; get
...just to shoot all day, probably I would gotten bored very soon, like that time when I ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...or more the few days. Secondly, have many different tasks is an opportunity to learn new sk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60336338032 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504716981132 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.1344086022 233% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.461540293 48.9658058833 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.0 100.406767564 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.1111111111 20.6045352989 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 5.45110844103 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234200787903 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105587198034 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910285516754 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147361698686 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673210976722 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 11.7677419355 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.71 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.0537634409 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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