TPO-43 - Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa

In my experience as a student, it is happened a few times to have a different opinion from the teacher holding the class. I do not usually interrupt the lesson, but if I think it is very important for the understanding of the topic, I do. Every time I retained that something incorrect was said and would have prevented myself to understand or follow the teacher reasoning, I arose my hand up, and ask for explanations.

First, I believe that if I have a doubt about what it is being explained, many other students could have the same question, therefore, interrupt the lesson and pointing out the something it is not clear or need to have a better explanation may help the classroom as a whole. Sometimes students think to be in disagreement with teachers just because they do not wholly understand what they are listening or they find difficult to follow complex arguments which need to be explained with other words or examples.

Second, another reason why I retain to interrupt the lesson is when I do not really understand something or I believe that, for example, a phenomenon can be explained in a different way from it is presented, this is very useful for me to follow the reasoning and have a complete idea of what I am learning to. I an idea comes up in my mind and it is different from the one of the teacher, I need to know what the teacher thinks about it, this is because a believes that during lectures it is very important to interact with the teachers in order to have interesting discussions that could improve the overall understand of the topic of the lesson.

Finally, I believe that interruptions as long as they are very short and used to really ask for explanations or to expose a different point of views, are very useful for the entire classroom and not annoying at all. On the contrary, I you need for a longer explanation or you are totally in disagreement with the teacher, in my opinion, is it better to say nothing during the lecture, and talk to the teacher when the class is over and the people are gone.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... example, a phenomenon can be explained in a different way from it is presented, this is very usef...
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Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...mplete idea of what I am learning to. I an idea comes up in my mind and it is diff...
Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...cher thinks about it, this is because a believes that during lectures it is very importa...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53513513514 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75607304717 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3782929058 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.444444444 100.406767564 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.1111111111 20.6045352989 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 5.45110844103 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1385726504 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684942019093 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025228711007 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948438805666 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219917407944 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 11.7677419355 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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