TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends

1212121212

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...easier. I have a few friends which I am friend with. Even my girlfriend was for five y...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...g so called 'short time' fun. people cannot rely on new friendships and coul...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...on new friendships and could not expect these kind of friends to help them when they are i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...are old and true friends. And last but not least reason by which I justify my stance is ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, still, as for, i think, kind of, by and large, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69556840077 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58780990609 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470134874759 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3370369287 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2592592593 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.51851851852 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263067483991 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782713905165 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531448394049 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152815015475 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504696679032 0.0645574589148 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.