What are the qualities of a good university Use examples and reasons to develop your argument

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What are the qualities of a good university? Use examples and reasons to develop your argument.

The best university should have better facilities and experienced teacher for the following reasons.
First of all, if the university has the best facilities such as an updated library, sports center, and high-speed internet, it helps students to obtain better knowledge. For example, when I was studying for Masters's at Ohio State University, My College has had a library with all updated books and individual study rooms. It provides a good environment for students to focus on their studies.
second, a good university should have experienced teachers for better education. If the university has experienced staff, they share their knowledge to the students to reach their goals. What's more, it improves education standers as well as university reputation. When I was studying high school, we had a biology professor Alex. He prefers to thought lessons with a real-life example for better understanding, as a result, more students joined in the school and school reputation increase. It is not possible if the college doesn't have an experienced faculty.
Lastly, a good university must have a playground because it is also a part of education and for better health. If the university has a huge playground, students practice numerous games for competition. For example, when I was studying at the university, my friend Ram used to play cricket. Since my university has great facilities, he practiced well and got an opportunity to participate in state level competition. What's more, he settled as a sports person.
In the final analysis, the best college must have updated facilities like library, experienced staff, and sports center. If someone considering universities, they should consider all the above factors for the best university.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34057971014 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01471919439 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1207909302 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7058823529 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117774580699 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461330351149 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038573383077 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666781945702 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046964955476 0.0645574589148 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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